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Midwifery Personal Statement

My enthusiasm to venture into a challenging yet rewarding career began from an early exposure to midwifery. Observing my mother closely, eight years ago, through her antenatal, intrapartum and postnatal period gave me an insight into what this field entails and enabled me to truly embrace the vital responsibilities of a midwife. To be a midwife; to be able to support women and their families through the most vulnerable point in their lives, to be a part of a mother-to-be’s journey with the most rewarding outcome of a newborn infant and educating women on sexual health is, in my opinion, one of the most heartwarming experiences a job can offer. I firmly have faith in my abilities to pursue this career. 

A matter that is of vital importance to me is the rate of deaths of women from a Black, Asian, Minority Ethnic background during labour, and is something I wish to tackle when I become qualified. Recent reports (from MBRRACE-UK 11, ‘Saving Lives, Improving Mothers’ Care’) mortality rates between women from Black and Asian aggregated ethnic groups and White women. Because of this, I believe that it should be a priority to eradicate the inequalities faced by ethnic minorities faced in health and social care settings. I recognised the difficulties of this career path, however I am motivated to support the NHS through the recent challenges they are facing and I hope to contribute to the change. 

From December 2018 to January 2019 I had the privilege of visiting my home country, Uganda where I was lucky to have the opportunity to visit the less developed areas of Jinja and Kamapla, in particular the maternity clinics. I was inspired by the level of care being provided despite the very limited resources (such as access to epidural) allowing me to appreciate how privileged many people are in developed countries in regard to healthcare services. I was also able to gain awareness of new cultures and perspectives which makes me want to contribute to the change in developing countries once I qualify as a midwife. 

Furthermore, volunteering with the Imperial College Hospital Hammersmith has enabled me to learn, advance and broaden my skills in person-centred care. I have been able to meet many patients from a variety of different backgrounds and now I have the chance to befriend individuals during a lonely and isolated period and to support and social interactions during a period of uncertainty. I am most proud of how well I have been taught to execute the 6 C's when caring for patients.  

Through my ongoing volunteering with Age UK Camden to provide one-to-one attention to elderly clients who may suffer from a range of mental health complications, dementia or are feeling isolated has enabled me to gain knowledge and insight into issues that impact on older people’s lives. My own job at Waitrose has additionally aided my personal development as it has given me space to expand my communication skills, listening abilities and have allowed me to learn to speak with clarity in my voice, knowing how to change and adapt my tone to suit different individuals to make them feel comfortable. I also have learnt one-to-one conversational support which is a key

skill in the midwifery field as difficult times are likely to occur and a calm and reassuring manner will be vital.  

In my free time, I am an enthusiastic reader as I have an incredibly vivid imagination which contributes to my passion. Most importantly, I am a feminist and have a strong determination to advocate for all women to have equal rights and opportunities to fight against oppression. I stay up to date with the news about women across the world who are struggling and hidden behind the patriarchal society (in particular countries such as Iran, Saudi Arabia and Pakistan). 

I am highly motivated by the prospects of developing knowledge, in person experience and skills through my higher education courses. I am excited the best I can be, in order to advocate for both the mother and baby.  

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Midwifery Personal Statement Example

Sample statement.

For quite a long time I have known that my future career lies within the nursing profession but was unsure of my exact direction. In the last couple of years I have spoken to several different nurses and have attended hospital open days and two work placements and I am now convinced that midwifery is for me.

I have been very impressed with the midwives that I have met and feel that the opportunity to look after women throughout their pregnancy, labour, birth and beyond into the postnatal period would be very rewarding. Being involved with women and their families at such an exciting and yet still quite stressful time of life will enable me to use my communication skills and my abilities to care for people in a calm and non-judgemental way.

Being a good midwife is about having the medical skills and knowledge to guide a woman through a healthy pregnancy and to be alert to the earliest signs that something may be wrong. Caring for diabetic women in pregnancy is a particular interest, as my older sister was diabetic and experienced various complications during her pregnancy last year. Having a calm and dependable midwife was essential to her well being throughout the pregnancy.

It is very important for midwives to be aware of the latest medical knowledge and to inform and explain things to women as clearly and sympathetically as possible so that they can be empowered to make their own informed decisions. Although it would be emotionally challenging, I would like to gain experience working with women who have given birth prematurely or who have had a baby who is born with serious health problems. I believe I have the maturity to provide the support as well as the medical care necessary.

My two work placements so far have been in the maternity unit of my local hospital and out with a community midwife. These were two very different experiences but I thoroughly enjoyed them both. During my placement in the hospital I was able to help monitor a fetal heart beat and to chat to mothers whose babies were just a day old. My days out with the community midwife showed me just how variable this work is and I was excited by the chance to see families and babies in their own homes. The midwife that I shadowed was welcomed and treated as part of the family group, which showed me just how important midwives are in the wider community.

By doing a midwifery degree I hope to become as well qualified as possible on the medical side but I realise that being a good midwife is also about gaining experience of different situations. I would welcome the opportunity to work abroad at some stage of my early career, in a developing world situation. I was lucky enough to visit Kenya last summer with a project to raise awareness of childhood vaccination and to assist the vaccination teams. I met lots of mothers and children and saw how different their situation is compared to a typical family in the UK.

I am working hard to get the grades I need for university but outside work I enjoy playing badminton and painting with watercolours. Some of my time is also devoted to my new niece who is now 6 months old and who has become a very special person on my life. Seeing her grow and develop has confirmed my wish to work with mothers and babies and I am excited to start my journey into midwifery.

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Top tips on how to write a personal statement for midwifery.

To celebrate International Midwives Day on 5 May, current student Jess, shares some tips on how to write a personal statement if your applying for BSc (Hons) Midwifery.

Writing about yourself in general is hard enough but when you only have 4,000 characters to make a great first impression, mention all your transferable skills, talk about your experience, why you want to be a midwife and somehow make it exciting to read is one tall order!

Writing my personal statement I knew already how competitive it is when applying for a place on a midwifery programme. Limiting my chances by only applying to 2 university’s made the process even scarier! I started drafting my personal statement as early as I could, having been through the process before I had a personal statement to work from BUT i am so glad I scrapped the whole thing and started over. The best thing I did was get hold of a book for writing personal statements for midwifery. I made every mistake going when writing my personal statement at 17 and that truly was from a lack of research and understanding of the role of a midwife and not for lack of passion.

Here’s my top tips for writing a personal statement!

1) Start as early as you can! Even if you just start with a bullet pointed list of everything you want to put into your statement… it’s a start.

2) Draft, Draft and Re-Draft! Make the most of support from tutors or other professionals who offer to read your statement. It’s so important to make sure your sentence structure, spelling and grammar are up to scratch.

3) Read it out loud. It helps so much to read it through and you will pick up on so many more typing issues and mistakes by reading it out loud.

4) When you do start writing make sure you type it in a word document or keep a hard copy rather than typing straight into UCAS as this makes it easier for spell check and checking the word limit.

5) If your a few characters over make sure you check the end of your sentences and paragraphs as I didn’t realise that I always put extra spaces on the end which does take up characters and line space!

Now for midwifery specific tips!

1) Don’t talk about babies! The role of a midwife is about supporting women, and that should be the focus of your statement.

2) Research the skills and qualities of a midwife and try to talk about how you have those skills. Try to follow the format of what is the skill? show evidence of you having it ( talk about experience) and then why that skill is important in midwifery practice.

3) BUZZ WORDS! the 6 C’s of care are a great place to start and if you don’t know what they are go and read up about them! Also consider the importance of non-judgemental care especially in the context of the diversity of women and families that you may encounter through midwifery care.

4) The NMC’s code of conduct is a great resource and I would definitely make sure you’ve read it at some point before interviews.

5) Find something about midwifery that gets you excited and talk about it, get that passion across. Look up current ‘hot topics’ if your ensure.

6) Bring that reader in with that very first sentence! I would make use of your buzz words or show something about your understanding of the role of a midwife in that very first sentence!

7) Don’t worry if you can’t summarise why you want to be a midwife! Its not about the why its about how you’ve got to this point now, what have you done to prove that this is the career for you!

8) Remember your applying for a degree and not a job as a midwife just yet, so try and make some acknowledgement to being able to cope with the academic side of the course and your ability to manage your time especially as the midwifery course is 50% study and 50% placement.

9) Make sure you finish that personal statement with a really powerful ending. That will be the very last thing they read and if they haven’t made their mind up by that point that could be what sways it!

10) Make sure that it truly represents you and DON’T LIE! your personal statement will be the only thing they have about you when it comes to interview so they will talk about it with you if you can’t expand on what you’ve said or you seem to not know much about that 6 year placement you did in Antarctica setting up a midwifery unit for Eskimo’s they will realise it was probably a lie!

Just be yourself and if you haven’t got experience or struggle to get it that’s fine! So many transferable skills can come from other jobs. Retail work is about working with people, communicating with customers. Having patience when dealing with frustrated customers. Its all transferable skills so talk about it!

I hope these tips help anyone writing their statement and good luck on your journey to becoming student midwives!

Jess Correia, Midwifery student.

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Midwifery Personal Statement

Perfect your Midwifery personal statement following this example from a UCL applicant. Use it as a guide to writing your personal statement for the Midwifery course . See below the personal statement example for Midwifery .

Midwifery Personal Statement Example

As a future midwife, I am passionate about providing compassionate care to mothers and their families during one of the most pivotal moments in their lives. I am excited about the opportunity to study midwifery at UCL University and contribute to the field through research and clinical practice.

I have always been drawn to the medical field, and I have been working as a labour and delivery assistant for the past three years. This experience has solidified my desire to become a midwife and has taught me the importance of communication, empathy, and clinical competence.

I have a strong background in science, having completed my undergraduate degree in biology with a focus on women’s health. I am also currently pursuing my Master of Science in midwifery, which has provided me with a strong foundation in the theory and practice of midwifery care.

I am confident that studying at UCL University will provide me with the knowledge, skills, and experience necessary to become a successful midwife. I am eager to join the vibrant midwifery community at UCL and contribute to the field through my research and clinical practice. I am committed to providing high-quality care to mothers and their families, and I am dedicated to lifelong learning and professional development. Thank you for considering my application.

In addition to my academic and professional experience, I am also a member of the Midwives Association of North America, where I have had the opportunity to attend conferences, network with other midwives, and stay up-to-date on the latest research and best practices in the field. I am also a volunteer at a local pregnancy resource centre, where I assist pregnant women and new mothers with information and support.

I am excited about the prospect of studying at UCL University and becoming part of the rich history and tradition of midwifery at the institution. I am committed to working hard and achieving my goals, and I believe that studying at UCL will provide me with the knowledge, skills, and experience necessary to become a successful midwife. Thank you for considering my application.

Over the course of my school career, I have always been recognized for my hard work and dedication. Both independently and in a group, I am able to perform at a high level. Having the ability to work independently and as part of a team is important for midwives. As a result, he has been given important leadership roles, such as house captain and prefect. Moreover, public speaking has helped me to improve my communication skills so that I can clearly convey my ideas and thoughts to people of all ages and backgrounds.

Midwifery Personal Statement Tips

When writing your midwifery personal statement , include the following:

• What inspired you to choose Midwifery
• Why do you wish to work as Midwifery
• What you know about midwifery
• Qualities and abilities that will make you a great midwife
• Working with babies is a plus, add experience if have it
• Demonstrate your knowledge of midwifery
• The degree, modules, and dissertation topic you chose were relevant.
• Skills, hobbies, and achievements relevant to the midwifery course

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University Personal Statement

By the time you start to write your personal statement, you should know why you want to be a midwife. This is your chance to show the admission tutors why, out of the hundreds of applicants they receive, they should be particularly keen to interview you.

Going wrong

Most people either provide personal statements which are boring and very similar to everyone else’s, or provide information which isn’t relevant or appropriate.

It’s important for your application to show the right:

• Personality
• Commitment/ enthusiasm
• Understanding

What should you include in your personal statement?

• Reasons why you want to be a midwife
• Your awareness of what a midwife is
• Your understanding of the needs of service users
• Your ability to communicate, work in a team, be organised and have empathy
• Demonstrate that you are non-judgemental

Personal statements that stand-out

Getting on a midwifery course is tough, and gets tougher every year. So you may need to be a little ‘tactical’ about how you approach it in order to secure your place within this highly sought- after career.

• Work experience We’ve all done a range of jobs, but not all of them will show evidence to uni tutors that you have the skills to train as a midwife. Midwifery-related work experience, including any volunteering or shadowing is very useful, but if you haven’t got this there are plenty of other ways you can show you have what it takes. There are plenty of ‘caring’ professions through which you can show a range of very transferable skills such as a kind, empathetic and practical approach. Even jobs which don’t fall neatly into this category can have a lot of merit when it comes to proving your worth to application assessors. You just need to know how to present your experience in a way which makes it seem relevant and highly desirable, even if at first glance it’s not obvious how this role and midwifery connect.
• Extra activities When there is a pile of application forms on a desk, all describing similar qualifications and similar work experience, it can be the extra activities which make all the difference to your application, so use your free time wisely! If you are just finishing school or college you may be thinking about taking a year out and applying for a uni place on your return. You can use this year to get experience in a relevant profession or do some volunteering either locally or abroad. Travelling can have its merits, although you will need to demonstrate that you did more than bar-hop across continents if you want to impress potential employers!
• Reading You don’t need to quote journals at length to make a good impression, but if you give some indication of reading around your subject it will go a long way to towards showing your commitment to the profession. You may wish to mention something current happening in the profession mentioned in the mainstream media or a latest piece of research which could have an impact on practice. By referencing this, not simply as a snippet directly lifted but as a basis for your own comment and reflection, you will show your interest in the profession ad motivation to learn more.
• Understanding the course Some universities want to be sure you know what you are letting yourself in for! They will expect to see that you understand the clinical placement aspect of the course, that this may involve travel, shifts and a real work environment (no slacking just because you are a ‘student’!)
• Appreciation of the challenges  Uni tutors are wary of selecting anyone who may drop out of the course, or leave the profession early, simply because they didn’t appreciate the demands which they would be facing. To have come this far you’ll know that a career in midwifery is not an easy option. Rewarding, fascinating, fulfilling yes, but rarely easy. The training requirements are no different, and if you can show that you have not only understood this but have strategies to overcome these obstacles, your uni assessors will be able to put another ‘yes’ tick next to your name.
• Examples  Personal statements tend to be littered with phrases such as ‘work well independently as well as part of a team,’ ‘good communication skills’ and ‘reliable and hardworking’. The problem is, when everyone is writing the same thing it becomes rather meaningless. To really stand out you need to prove these things, and that’s done through your personal examples. These have the power to back up even the blandest generalisation and turn your personal statement into something that will make your tutors sit up and smile.

With all of these recommendations, understanding that you need to apply them to your statement is easier said than done. What’s the best way to write an example, how much detail should you include, where should you put it? How can you seem genuine about the challenges you will face and how can you convince your audience that you can face these? What extra activities are highly regarded and which would be frowned upon? There are plenty of opportunities you get your personal statement spot-on, and plenty to mess it up as well! If you’d like more help on how to get it right, click here.

Top 10 Personal Statement Mistakes

• 1. Your personal statement is lacking personality.
• 2. You write about previous work experience, which is unrelated to your application.
• 3. You write about your own experience of giving birth.
• 4. You write about being a team player and how well you communicate, but do not give any examples.
• 5. You forget to write why you have chosen to be a midwife.
• 6. You don’t demonstrate any wider reading about health care or midwifery.
• 7. You don’t demonstrate your awareness of challenges such a shift work or balancing placement with academia, and how you would overcome such obstacles.
• 8. You haven’t done any work experience within the care sector
• 9. You mention your other commitments, which may hinder your ability to work full time.
• 10. You submit your personal statement without getting someone to proof read it for structure, typos and grammar.

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• Mature students: five things to include in your personal statement

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As a mature student, your personal statement will still cover the same basic things as any personal statement: evidence of your interest in, understanding of, and enthusiasm for the chosen subject.

You may also have a lot more life history to fit into your statement than the average school leaver. So, think carefully about which aspects of your past experiences best suit the course and type of university you want to apply to. 

If you’re ready to begin your personal statement , read our top tips on what every applicant should include. 

Rob Evans – Head Of Admissions, University Of Sussex

Five things to include in your personal statement, 1. answer the question ‘why now…’.

Explain why you've decided to change direction and apply to university at this point in your life. Makes some notes to reflect on things like why you didn't choose to go to university immediately after school or college, or why studying later was part of your plan. Think too about how you have changed and developed. Whatever your reasons for studying now, you’ll need to explain those in your statement.

2. Demonstrate your personal progression

Tell them why it makes sense for you to study now. Why is a degree the logical next step for you? You could talk about:

• your work experience
• training courses
• interests and hobbies
• your general reading

And say how you would make further progress through your studies.

If your primary goal is to train for a new career, show you’re aware of the specific challenges of that career, and that you ’ ve researched it before you apply.

Browse our subject guides to sign up for subject-specific statement tips, and more.

3. Talk about your life and work experience

This is where you have the advantage as a mature student.

Student Recruitment Officer at the University of Liverpool, Louise Carr, says:

Mature students will have much richer life experience they can bring, and that doesn’t necessarily need to be work experience, but also life experience. If they can say why it’s relevant for the course, that’s also helpful.

Try and relate any jobs and hobbies you mention to the course you want to study – even if that’s in relation to transferable skills like time management or communication skills.

4. Show you understand the time commitments of degree study

Any evidence of formal study helps to show the admissions tutor you're capable of studying and learning. Mention night school, Access to HE courses or on-the-job courses in your statement, even if they’re in a non-relevant field.

Student Recruitment Officer Louise Carr says:

Whether it’s a free course or a seminar or webinar they’ve attended, all those experiences can be drawn upon and used as examples to show they have the initiative to find out more about their subject of interest.

Juggling other responsibilities such as family, childcare, part-time work or travel can put extra pressure on mature students, so also show you understand the commitments of studying for a full or part-time degree.

5. Keep your statement story honest – and personal

You might have fewer tangible reasons for applying to university as a mature applicant than simply training for a new career.

65 year old Peter White is a retired programmer who decided to fulfil another ambition and apply for a fine arts degree. Pete successfully wrote a very personal statement about his journey that included his career, personal interests, the development of his painting and drawing, the constraints of his family circumstances, and his reasons for applying.

Don’t be afraid to tell the truth about you and your story.

Ready to get cracking? Read five things everyone should include in their statement here.

Ana Ghaffari Moghaddam – Third Year Law student and careers coach, University of Liverpool

• Do address why you want to study at this stage in your life.
• Do talk about your life and experiences so far, in relation to what you want to study.
• Do show you understand the commitment required to study for a degree.
• Don't underestimate everything you have achieved so far – most of it is relevant.
• Don’t forget to ask your friends and family what they think your strengths are.
• Don’t leave it until the last minute – take your time to think about all your past experiences.

Final thought

Director of Admissions at the University of Stirling, Shona Barrie, concludes:

Mature students will have much richer life experience they can bring.

These experiences can really make you stand out from other applicants, so highlight those transferable skills in your personal statement and be proud of what you’ve done so far in your life.

Louise Carr at the University of Liverpool adds:

Mature students are usually great students because they have drive. They’ve made a dedicated choice to perhaps make a change in their career or their life to go to university.

So, what are you waiting for?

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Midwifery personal statement

minimumeffort · 21/08/2014 10:41

I am hoping to apply for a midwifery course as a mature student and was hoping for some advice on writing my personal statement. Does anyone know what course providers are looking for or has anyone applied successfully over the last few years. Many thanks

Many thanks rascalls, I'll take a look.

Forgot to add....don't use the word 'passion'!

Im not doing a midwifery degree but have just been accepted into 3 different unis for another branch as a mature student. The only thing i can say is to speak from the heart. I never looked at any examples and just told them why i wanted to do it, why i am the best person with what qualities i have etc etc. I got good feedback from all unis and they said it made for a change than the norm as they are all samey and all say the same things. Whereas you being honest and speaking from what you know can only come from you and is individual if that makes sense?

Talk about women, not babies. Bang on a lot about your relevant experience. Look up the NMC standards for midwifery practice and chuck the buzzwords in...advocate, holistic, empowerment, woman centred. The midwifery sanctuary is a great online forum which will help you. Good luck!

Agree with boysclothes, don't talk about babies, they are the minutest part of our job. Talk about empowering women, being an advocate, have an awareness of issues such as domestic violence, drug and alcohol abuse, and the importance of giving women choice (always informed choice). Good luck!

Defitiely DO use the words "passion/passionate"; definitely DON'T look at medical student/nursing statements - completely & utterly different to what Midwifery lecturers are looking for; and definitely talk about women rather than babies as Boysclothes & Crazeeladee have said. Sign up for an SMNET 'How to get a Uni Place' one day course - it was fab, I went straight home and re-wrote my personal statement. Submitted it that night, and am now just about to begin the last year of my Midwife training as an (extra) mature student. In fact take a look at SMNET as there's loads of helpful, and subject specific advice on there. I would be very wary of looking outside of Midwifery for advice as it's such a specific degree that advice from other subjects doesn't really apply, even nursing. It's very, very different.

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There some great midwifery personal statement samples that might help you. And here are some great tips on general personal statement writing. Hope this helps those who are applying now! Best of luck with admissions!

Out experience is of DD applying for medicine. Print off personal requirements from University websites (including perhaps better examples from similar Universities) . Each will give you a list of the experience and attributes they expect. (Interest in midwifery, involvement with the wider community, leadership, ability to cope under pressure etc) Then make sure you have covered each one, with evidence. I suspect Universities are not unlike other bits of the public sector and to ensure consistency, applications are scored. And that however appealing your PS might be, if you don't tick the boxes, you don't get the interview. I think hers ended up as four papas, one on interest and motivation, two on experience and shadowing and insights she had gained from these, and a fourth covering interests, but steered to her application. So ability to juggle competing demands, perseverance, leadership, teamwork and other softer skills. One example was to down play sports achievements but instead highlight sharing her enthusiasm and skills by volunteering with a disabled sports group, not least helping others overcome fears and physical barriers. If you follow what the University says they are looking for, it becomes much easier.

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Midwifery personal statement example 4.

From a young age I have had a desire to help and care for people. Once I was old enough to understand the uniqueness and beauty of all stages of pregnancy and birth, I knew that I wanted it to be a part of my everyday life. As soon as I started researching the role of a midwife, I knew it was the perfect career for me as pregnancy and birth are such significant times in the lives of women and their families.

By arranging a tour of the maternity department at Kingston Hospital, I was given the opportunity to learn about the role of the midwife from a group of working midwives. They helped me understand that the midwife plays an important role from conception until the postnatal period and beyond. I was also interested to learn that the midwife provides help and advice for the partners and families of the women as well as the mother herself.

I feel that all of the subjects that I have chosen to study at A Level enhance the skills I will need as a midwife. Sociology enables me to understand cultures and families from a very open-minded point of view, and therefore have a greater understanding of their specific needs. Philosophy exercises my ability to see situations from more than one point of view, so I can make decisions by considering numerous factors and view points. French is useful as I feel that being I could offer French speaking women the same outstanding service as English speakers.

In addition to my A levels, achieving an A* in GCSE biology gives me confidence that I am more than able to do well in the pure science modules of the course. By reading books such as ‘Midwife Crisis: The Calamities of a Trainee Midwife’ by Hilary Cotterill, I was able to further my understanding of the skills required to be a midwife of the highest standard. In addition, watching documentaries such as ‘Desperate Midwives’ (BBC in 2006) and ‘Confessions of a Nurse’ (Channel 4 in 2009) really increased my interest in being to be part of the rising standards of the NHS and offering an excellent service to women at such a special time in their lives. I have also found working through the StudentMidwife.net “Getting Familiar with Midwifery” workbook invaluable for discovering more about the academic studies of training to be midwife. I feel it has given me great insight into what I will study as a student midwife and made me more confident that is right career for me.

Next summer (2010), I have been given the opportunity to extend my knowledge of the role of the midwife by witnessing the practice of midwives in Malawi. Through the Landirani Trust, a charity working with communities in Malawi, I have been given the chance to work with a Midwife in the local clinic, shadowing her everyday activities and helping out where possible.

Throughout my school life I have always been viewed as hardworking and dedicated in everything I do. I have the ability to work to a high standard both independently and in a group. This is important as midwives need to be able to work as part of a team and autonomously. This has been rewarded by being given important leadership roles such as house captain and school prefect. I also feel that public speaking has greatly improved my communication so that I can clearly convey my ideas and thoughts to a wide range of people of all ages and from all backgrounds.

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Sun, 26/09/2010 - 16:18

Leaving the part about the early desire to help poeple ( it can be a little to early) this statement has lots of relavent information relating to your desire to learn and practice midwifery.you have been exstreamly lucky to have been part of the clinic in malawi.as a mum of three this is where my practical exsperience lies, however i strive to study midwifery and eventually specialise in ultrasound. I realy hope you made it to study. You have inspired many more thoughts and ideas of how to write my statement....good luck in your future career.

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Fri, 01/10/2010 - 22:44

This personal statement gives me hope and reassurance that mine can sound reasonable too. Recently, I have read a few that sound extreamly proffesional and as if these people do nothing but volunteer, do work experience and revolve their world around the course they havent yet got into and I've been struggling to understand how they can fit it all in?! This is nice and balanced between getting a tour to linking subjects to the course and getting an amazing experience to work in Malawi. It's also well written without it looking like you tried too hard. You're obviously genuinly keen and I hope everything went well!

Fri, 04/02/2011 - 14:54

I just wanted to say that I am now in trouble as someone has copied parts of my statement so UCAS detection system has highlighted in my new application that I have copied someone else's statement.

Can I PLEASE stress that I would appreciate it if: a) you could respect this as my own work and not copy any of it, I do not want to have to take it down if people are finding it useful. b) whoever did copy this could own up because it is going to penalise my application and that's totally unfair.

what a pity someone has

Sat, 02/07/2011 - 23:46

what a pity someone has abused your good will in this way. best of luck with it and well done on the lovely statement. i have read it and will use it as inspiration in my own only.

advise needed

Thu, 07/07/2011 - 09:46

hey there is is a greatpersonal statement very well detailed and usefull for ppl like us who have this desire ,iv got my interview next week the get o the higher education access course and have to write a statement in from of them aswell as an assessment on litracy and numeracy any advise or info you could give me would be very appreciated,i have 3 children my self and i loved every min ov child birth also have been a birthing parnter for a friend and the hole thing was truly amazing thank leanne :)

did you get a place?!

Wed, 13/07/2011 - 10:30

WOW girl this is amazing

Mon, 16/09/2013 - 17:58

WOW girl this is amazing hehehehehehhee i dnt know hw u wrote it soo perfectly hehehe i am struggling with mine really badly i sent a first draft and it was rubbish lol *laughs to herself* wow good luck i think u already got in hehehe :)

Don't Plagiarise this Statement!

Mon, 09/12/2013 - 07:58

I work in the Admissions Department of a university, dealing with applications for undergraduate midwifery degree programmes. So far, parts of this statement have been copied by four applicants, just in the statements I have reviewed! If you copy any part of this statement it WILL be detected by UCAS, it WILL be reported to the universities you have applied, and you run the risk of having your application rejected for plagiarism. DON'T COPY OTHER PEOPLE'S PERSONAL STATEMENTS!!!

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