Interacting with community health practitioners, patients, and families
Investigating a health problem in its complexity
Acquisition of learning objectives, as measured by the quality of the written report, oral presentation, and poster presentation was good to very good for over 85% of students as evaluated by the program directors and teaching staff. When students were asked to self-evaluate the acquisition of competencies during their community immersion clerkship, it appeared that a large majority felt that they had acquired those competencies well ( Table 3 , data from two successive cohorts comprising 169 students).
Percentages of students who self-reported being able to perform specific clerkship-related competencies 9 months before the clerkship and one month, one year, 2 years, and 3 years afterwards
Competencies related to community immersion clerkship | n = 121 9 months before % | n = 152 1 month after % | n = 98 1 year after % | n = 72 2 years after % | n = 68 3 years after % |
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Investigate a health problem from a biopsychosocial perspective | 32 | 92 | 90 | 90 | 90 |
Establish the degree of priority of a health problem in a community | 21 | 76 | 80 | 94 | 90 |
Collect data on a priority health problem in the community | 29 | 94 | 94 | 94 | 87 |
Describe organization and functioning of community health services | 12 | 74 | 71 | 76 | 80 |
Describe inequities in access to health services | 25 | 76 | 80 | 76 | 82 |
Describe socioeconomic health risk factors | 18 | 86 | 85 | 78 | 78 |
Identify community health actors | 24 | 92 | 88 | 85 | 86 |
Describe collaboration channels between community health practitioners | 15 | 82 | 78 | 88 | 87 |
Behavior evaluation could not be monitored per se. However, testimonies by former students indicate that the community immersion clerkship experience was a crucial one in their preclinical years. A few examples reported elsewhere 17 are given here as an illustration:
Educational innovations.
In the context of Geneva, the community immersion clerkship was innovative in introducing community-based activities and allowing the students to experience the hands-on approach of getting involved with community health institutions. It was also innovative in integrating community health workers into the teaching staff. Furthermore, it introduced innovative evaluation procedures, because it abandoned traditional multichoice questions in favor of a written report on the health topic investigated an oral presentation to fellow students, and a poster presentation on the community health network in charge of the health problem investigated. Some of these innovations even had some influence on several other programs of the curriculum, especially elective programs where several courses adopted written reports or oral presentations in front of colleagues as examination procedures.
Two major innovations took place over the years. The first was the development of collaboration with the University of Applied Health Sciences in charge of training nurses, dieticians, midwives, physiotherapists, and medical radiology technicians. This allowed creation of multiprofessional groups of students, similar to the teams of health professionals they would have to work with in the future. This experience, now in its seventh year, appears to be positive, with students as well as tutors having identified the complementary vision such an approach brings in studying a health problem in its biopsychosocial dimensions. Second, there was the possibility 10 years ago to take a clerkship, which was initially limited at Geneva, in a community health setting abroad. This triggered extraordinary interest among the students, who over the years came up with interesting community health projects around the world. Students must submit a community health project, which might be accepted or not by an ad hoc committee, and the project must also get support from a local community health structure that is in close connection with a Swiss-based association. Over the years, students have investigated health problems and become acquainted with different health systems with different social and cultural contexts in over 35 countries. Student feedback continues to be very positive, eg, “a unique experience, very enriching, that brings you to consider the world differently and that triggers a very personal journey on one’s role as a health professional and a world citizen”. Examples of topics investigated abroad and also in Geneva are listed in Table 4 .
Community immersion program: examples of topics studied over the years in Geneva and abroad
Specific topics studied in Geneva | Domains of investigation | Specific topics studied in foreign countries |
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Measles | Infectious diseases | Malaria in Kenya |
AIDS | Tuberculosis in Nepal | |
STD | AIDS prevention in Gabon Chagas disease in Argentina AIDS in Bolivia Nosocomial infections in Mali | |
Alcohol consumption | Behaviors/lifestyle | Violence against women in India |
Addiction to illicit drugs | Addiction to illicit drugs in India | |
Smoking | ||
Violence against women | ||
Diabetes | Chronic diseases | Diabetes in rural Benin |
Obesity | Blindness in Nicaragua | |
Coronary heart disease | Epilepsy in Equator | |
Depression | Leprosy in Nepal | |
Dementia | ||
Paraplegia | ||
Breast cancer | ||
Lung cancer | ||
Organization of medical emergencies | Organization of the health system | Access to safe birth in Nicaragua |
Organ transplantation | Access to retroviral therapy in South Africa | |
Palliative care versus euthanasia | Expanded program of immunization in Senegal | |
Reimbursement of alternative/complementary medicines | Prevention of nosocomial infections in Armenia | |
Activity of general practitioners in rural and urban areas | Access to health care in the Philippines | |
Premature infants | Maternal and child health | Infant malnutrition in Burkina Faso |
Pregnancies at risk | Children living with HIV in Thailand | |
Abortion | Children living with a handicap in Peru | |
Infertility | ||
Children living with a handicap | ||
Cystic fibrosis Autism | Congenital disorders | Children with congenital mental retardation in Vietnam |
Trisomy | ||
Health of detainees | Health of vulnerable populations | Health of street children in Mongolia |
Health of sex workers | Health of street children in Argentina | |
Health of refugees | Health of refugees in Lebanon | |
Health of clandestine workers | Health of native populations in Australia |
Abbreviations: AIDS, acquired immune deficiency syndrome; HIV, human immunodeficiency virus; STD, sexually transmitted infection.
Over the 15-year period of observation, while investigating their specific public health problems, students visited several hundred community health structures, local nongovernmental organizations, and international organizations. They also met and interviewed hundreds of patients and their families, as well as community health personnel and political decision-makers.
Students who took their clerkship in Geneva also organized specific events related to the health topic they were investigating, such as intra-university prevention campaigns against melanoma, promotion of vaccination against hepatitis B, and developing guidelines for prevention of acquired immunodeficiency syndrome among migrant populations. On several occasions, the students’ work had a direct influence on decisions made by health authorities, including:
Students who took their clerkship abroad were often able to support local community health centers in a very concrete way, such as teaching diabetic patients at a suburban health center in Ecuador, monitoring neonatal complications in a mother and child health center in Nicaragua, teaching basic hygiene (how to brush teeth and wash hands) to children in an orphanage in Vietnam, monitoring nosocomial infections in a community hospital in Mali, and developing a website and a brand for a small nongovernmental organization in Bolivia.
High student satisfaction rates and sustained student enthusiasm, strong faculty commitment, university support, and good acceptance by community health actors have allowed the community immersion clerkship program to become a highlight of the Geneva problem-based medical curriculum over the past 15 years. The community immersion clerkship program has also strengthened ties between community health institutions and the Medical School, contributing to the latter’s social accountability, as discussed in the literature. 24
The Geneva community immersion clerkship program was conceived of taking into account the community-based education recommendations defined by the World Health Organization 25 , 26 and later developed by Kristina et al, 27 including competencies in prevention and health promotion, identifying factors impacting on health, determining the incidence and prevalence of disease in the community, and collaborating with professionals from other disciplines. A special focus of the Geneva community immersion clerkship has been to facilitate students in encountering patients and health professionals in their own environment and confronting them with “the complex interplay between physical, psychological, social and environmental factors in health and illness”. 27
As mentioned elsewhere in the literature, 28 the consensus approach adopted by teachers and partner institutions in developing the program and defining its objectives seemed to facilitate implementation of the program and contribute to tutors’ commitment. It probably also strengthened the interaction between the students and community health institutions, thus providing facilitated learning opportunities, as has been reported already. 29
The evaluation results overall show student high satisfaction with the community immersion clerkship. In fact, the clerkship gets its highest approval ratings in the Geneva undergraduate medical curriculum, 16 with community-based medical programs being frequently evaluated well by students. 30 Students mentioned in particular their interactions with community health professionals, and patients and families as being fulfilling, enriching, and stimulating, which has also been mentioned by others. 31
Globally, the quality of the students’ work, in the form of written reports, oral presentations, and poster presentations, met the teachers’ expectations and university standards, in part due to the enthusiasm and commitment of students in their community involvement, which has been reported elsewhere. 31 Further, the students’ perception of their competencies seemed to be maintained over the years. Subjective self-reported perception of acquired competencies and high satisfaction with the community experience might stimulate motivation for learning 32 and orient future medical activities, contributing to the “training of community-responsive physicians”. 33
Although there was no true behavior evaluation, strong testimonies from students regarding their community experience suggest that this early hands-on experience in community settings might represent an important formative process and contribute to development of appropriate attitudes towards their future medical practice. 34 , 35
The community immersion clerkship program was quite innovative in its educational approach, at least when compared with local standards, given that it is a unique community immersion experience during the whole curriculum and fosters critical thinking and creativity among students.
There were two major adaptations made to the community immersion clerkship over the years, much in accordance with international recommendations. 36 First, a “formal partnership” with the University of Applied Health Sciences in charge of training nurses, physiotherapists, midwives, dieticians, and medical radiology technicians was established with the Medical School, which allowed collaborative projects between students, thus mixing students of different professional orientations and preparing them for future multiprofessional teamwork in the health sector, which has been advocated in the past. 37 Indeed, students showing prior experience with interprofessional education have been demonstrated to report significantly more positive attitudes towards multidisciplinary teamwork. 38 Second, the option to take the community immersion clerkship abroad fostered much energy and enthusiasm among students. It also gave students the opportunity for intercultural exposure and confronted them with health care at primary health care levels as well as with health issues when resources are scarce; such intercultural experiences might be especially valuable in the long term for medical practitioners in an ever-changing patient population. 39
The Geneva community immersion clerkship allowed students to interact with community health professionals, patients and their families, and community health decision-makers, such as politicians, legislators, and leaders, as well as community and nongovernmental organization leaders, thus preparing them to consider themselves as part of a network and as team members charged with the health of both individuals and communities, as recommended. The community immersion clerkship program also allowed hands-on experience with the implementation of real community health projects with the potential to contribute to the health of communities, and has certainly helped students to understand the concepts of public health. 40
The community immersion clerkship aims to train future doctors to respond to the health problems of individuals in all their complexity and to strengthen their ability to work with the community in order to promote healthy lifestyles and adequate health services, as well as raising their awareness of the necessity to collaborate with other health professionals. So far, the experience has been positive and the early enthusiasm of students has survived over the years. In the future, the program will need to move forward and seek more community involvement of students, encouraging them to make a commitment to and take leadership of community health projects, especially ones targeting vulnerable subgroups of the population, and thus drawing the Medical School towards more community involvement and more social accountability and responsibility.
The authors report no conflicts of interest in this work.
The Immersion Program at Rollins College is rooted in community engagement and leadership, seeking to broaden students’ understanding of the world through exposure to new environments and hands-on learning experiences.
“Ninety to ninety-five percent of immersion participants either agree or strongly agree that immersion experiences have an impact on them—to say it is powerful would be an understatement,” said Meredith Hein, director of the Center for Leadership and Community Engagement (CLCE) at Rollins College. “I truly believe it’s a life-changing experience for our students.”
The Immersion Program exists to offer student-led alternative break trips throughout Florida and other areas of the country. These trips, referred to as immersions, may last for a weekend or for a whole week, and are led by two student facilitators and one staff or faculty member. Each experience generally has between ten and twenty participants and focuses on a social impact area such as hunger, homelessness, the environment, or disaster relief, among many others. Immersion facilitators emphasize experiential learning and reflection on these trips, encouraging participants to consider how the issues they’re learning about affect their everyday lives.
The Immersion Program has been a part of Rollins since 2007, though it has experienced its most significant growth within the past three years. Meredith credits much of the Immersion Program’s recent success to the generous giving of the Miller Foundation.
“I don’t know that the Immersion Program would even exist [without funding from the Miller Foundation],” she said. “The Immersion Program is such a significant part of our work at Rollins. When you have a donor that supports something that is at the core of your mission, you can take a deep sigh of relief—you can sleep at night.”
Unprecedented Growth
Demand for immersion experiences has soared at Rollins in the last few years, to the point that CLCE has begun offering weekend experiences as well as week-long experiences. Each school year, more than 300 students, faculty, and staff members participate in twenty to twenty-five immersion experiences. As a result, Rollins has been ranked No. 1 for the highest percentage of students who participate in alternative break trips for three years in a row by Break Away, a national nonprofit organization that promotes quality alternative breaks.
Raul Carril (’15), a Rollins alumni and current graduate assistant with CLCE, remembers how the number of immersion applicants almost doubled in 2013-2014, the year he served as the student coordinator for the program. Raul believes that strengthening the Immersion Program brand—known as “Immersion Blue”—sparked new interest in the program that year by giving students something to gravitate toward visually.
“What are these immersion things?” students would ask when they saw their friends wearing their Immersion Blue T-shirts or painting their fingernails blue in anticipation of the reveal of new immersion destinations.
“I famously say that Immersion Blue is my favorite color,” Raul said. “[The brand] represents what has come out in Rollins through this program. It has created that culture and that atmosphere and something that resonates with our community. It is not just something within Student Affairs—it’s a larger initiative now within the Rollins campus community.”
A Place to Belong
“Not doing anything for fall break?” it read. “Come join us for a ‘Hot and Sweaty in the Swamp’ immersion experience.”
With no other plans in place, Raul decided to join the group in the Everglades—something he now says was one of the best decisions he ever made. The other participants on the trip became some of his closest friends at Rollins. One of the facilitators introduced him to the fraternity he eventually joined, and another facilitator would later co-lead an immersion experience to West Virginia with him.
“It’s been kind of a whirlwind, thinking about that one crazy email I opened and how that influenced and impacted my five years at Rollins,” he said. “I’m really grateful and really humbled by what the program and that opportunity have done for me.”
Meredith Hein says that Raul’s experience is not unusual—immersions serve as the gateway for many students to find their place on campus.
“We have experiences just for first-year students, and they go and find ‘their people,’” she said. “[Students] come to Rollins from all across the world. . . . They may be the only person they know coming to our institution. Some students find their niche through the social setting, but many find their place by doing this type of work.”
A Broader Worldview
For many other students, immersions open their eyes to the wider world outside of Rollins, and they return with new realizations and questions about social impact areas.
“Everything in that experience is built around thinking through how it’s meeting major learning outcomes,” Meredith said. “We use this term ‘unlearning.’ Up until students enter college, the foundation of where they’ve gained their knowledge and skills comes from their experiences or what someone else has told them. These immersions truly change the way our students think.”
This was the case for the program’s 2015-2016 student coordinator, Courtney Durbin (’16).
“I went on an immersion, and it really changed my perspective of how I was in this Rollins bubble,” Courtney said. “The Orlando area has a high level of homelessness, so to learn that and to know that there are people just down the street who are homeless and struggling to feed their children, it made me realize serving and helping others is a passion of mine.”
Courtney remembers her first immersion experience to St. Petersburg, Florida, vividly.
“There was one girl who was seventeen, younger than me, and she was homeless. It hit me in that moment—it can happen to anyone,” Courtney said. “I think there’s this stigma that homeless people aren’t people, like they aren’t human. Talking to her was an ‘ah-ha moment’ for me. [I realized,] ‘Wow, there are all these scary things we think about these people, but there are stories behind them.’ It just put the truth in perspective.”
Those ah-ha moments are something every immersion facilitator aims to help their participants realize, and encouraging thoughtful reflection is one of the key components to these trips.
“Reflection is like the connection dots that make those light bulb moments of, ‘Oh my goodness, I’ve never thought about this before.’ Our students ask these big questions, and they’re being challenged,” Meredith said.
Life-Long Lessons of Gratitude
Meredith has been involved with community engagement since 2006 when she joined Rollins as a graduate assistant. In the time since, she has developed several sayings she often quotes to her students, such as “Service is messy and unpredictable,” or “Leadership is messy and unpredictable.” Another idea she often expresses is: “Every person we meet in life, every story that we hear, and every place we go makes us a part of who we are.”
For Meredith, this truth hit home during her first immersion experience. It was January 2007, and she had gone with a group of Rollins students to New Orleans to continue with rebuilding the city after Hurricane Katrina. By the third day, she was covered in insulation and fiberglass and decided she had to take a shower, despite the Arctic temperatures of the water. After the fastest shower of her life, she sat on a porch outside talking with the other trip participants. The conversation started with a few complaints of being tired and cold but then evolved into an organic discussion about life.
“After about forty-five minutes of us shooting the breeze, this student shared with us—kind of out of nowhere—that for a year during middle school, when his parents had gotten a divorce, he and his dad lived out of their car and he was homeless,” Meredith said. “He didn’t know where his next meal was coming from, and he changed schools three or four times.”
However, this student was one of the happiest people she had ever met, Meredith explained. None of the group would have guessed his past, and for him to share that piece of himself brought her own small discomforts into perspective.
“That student reminded me of that idea of gratitude,” she said. “We’re not here to do something to make ourselves feel good. We’re here to support a community that is not getting the support they need from other places. That memory will always stick with me.”
These are the types of experiences that Meredith believes are priceless for students. She will never forget that conversation on the porch, nor will she forget the sense of community she felt when she reconnected with a New Orleans woman whose home she had worked on the year before. Raul will never forget gaining an understanding of the socioeconomic impact of coal mining on the West Virginian woman whose home he helped repair. Courtney remembers being brought to tears by the enthusiastic gratitude of a homeless man in Washington D.C. when she handed him a tray of food.
The long-lasting impact of these moments is part of the overall value of immersions, Raul believes.
“These impact areas, these experiences, can build on each other,” he said. “They take what you’re learning in the classroom and give you some skills and cultural world perception of what’s happening, and you can use that to advance your career as well. That’s why I like calling them experiences not trips, because a trip you just start and end, but an experience is something deeper. It latches onto you, and you can build on that.”
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Ways to integrate community engagement into an existing course.
Community engagement pedagogies, often called “service learning,” are ones that combine learning goals and community service in ways that can enhance both student growth and the common good. In the words of the National Service Learning Clearinghouse , it is “a teaching and learning strategy that integrates meaningful community service with instruction and reflection to enrich the learning experience, teach civic responsibility, and strengthen communities.” Or, to quote Vanderbilt University’s Janet S. Eyler (winner of the 2003 Thomas Ehrlich Faculty Award for Service Learning) and Dwight E. Giles, Jr., it is
“a form of experiential education where learning occurs through a cycle of action and reflection as students. . . seek to achieve real objectives for the community and deeper understanding and skills for themselves. In the process, students link personal and social development with academic and cognitive development. . . experience enhances understanding; understanding leads to more effective action.”
Typically, community engagement is incorporated into a course or series of courses by way of a project that has both learning and community action goals. This project is designed via collaboration between faculty and community partners, such as non-governmental organizations or government agencies. The project asks students to apply course content to community-based activities. This gives students experiential opportunities to learn in real world contexts and develop skills of community engagement, while affording community partners opportunities to address significant needs. Vanderbilt University’s Sharon Shields has argued that service learning is “one of the most significant teaching methodologies gaining momentum on many campuses.” Indeed, when done well, teaching through community engagement benefits students, faculty, communities, and institutions of higher education. Below are some of the benefits that education researchers and practitioners have associated with community engaged teaching.
Learning outcomes.
Discipline-based model.
In this model, students are expected to have a presence in the community throughout the semester and reflect on their experiences regularly. In these reflections, they use course content as a basis for their analysis and understanding of the key theoretical, methodological and applied issues at hand.
Problem-based model.
Students relate to the community much as “consultants” working for a “client.” Students work with community members to understand a particular community problem or need. This model presumes that the students have or will develop capacities with which to help communities solve a problem. For example: architecture students might design a park; business students might develop a web site; botany students might identify non-native plants and suggest eradication methods.
Capstone course model.
These courses are generally designed for majors and minors in a given discipline and are offered almost exclusively to students in their final year. Capstone courses ask students to draw upon the knowledge they have obtained throughout their course work and combine it with relevant service work in the community. The goal of capstone courses is usually either exploring a new topic or synthesizing students’ understanding of their discipline.
Service internship model.
This approach asks students to work as many as 10 to 20 hours a week in a community setting. As in traditional internships, students are charged with producing a body of work that is of value to the community or site. However, unlike traditional internships, service internships have on-going faculty-guided reflection to challenge the students to analyze their new experiences using discipline-based theories. Service internships focus on reciprocity: the idea that the community and the student benefit equally from the experience.
Action research model.
Community-based action research is similar to an independent study option for the student who is highly experienced in community work. This approach can be effective with small classes or groups of students. In this model, students work closely with faculty members to learn research methodology while serving as advocates for communities. This model assumes that students are or can be trained to be competent in time management and can negotiate diverse communities.
Directed study additional/extra credit model.
Students can register for up to three additional/extra credits in a course by making special arrangements with the instructor to complete an added community-based project. The course instructor serves as the advisor for the directed study option. Such arrangements require departmental approval and formal student registration.
There are many ways to integrate community engagement into an existing course, depending on the learning goals, the size of the class, the academic preparation of the students, and the community partnership or project type. Below are some general tips to consider as you begin:
On the Common Application, a number of colleges have begun to require that students respond to a supplemental essay question that sounds something like this:
Tell us a bit more about a community you are a part of.
Here is the exact wording from a few schools:
University of Michigan: “Everyone belongs to many different communities and/or groups defined by (among other things) shared geography, religion, ethnicity, income, cuisine, interest, race, ideology, or intellectual heritage. Choose one of the communities to which you belong, and describe that community and your place within it. (250 words)”
Duke University: “We seek a talented, engaged student body that embodies the wide range of human experience; we believe that the diversity of our students makes our community stronger. If you'd like to share a perspective you bring or experiences you've had to help us understand you better—perhaps related to a community you belong to, your sexual orientation or gender identity, or your family or cultural background—we encourage you to do so. Real people are reading your application, and we want to do our best to understand and appreciate the real people applying. (250 words)
(Old) Brown University: “Tell us about a place or community you call home. How has it shaped your perspective? (250 words)
I love this essay question.
Why? Because, while this essay is largely asking about your place within that community, it is a great opportunity to share more about you, and how you will most likely engage with that community (or other communities) on your future college campus.
It’s a chance to say: “Here’s how I connect with folks in this community. And if accepted to your college, I’ll probably be active in getting involved with that same community and others on your college campus.”
And colleges want students who are going to be active in engaging with their community.
Step 1: decide what community you want to write about.
How? This may seem obvious, but it can be really helpful to first brainstorm the communities you’re already a part of.
Here’s how:
Create a “communities” chart by listing all the communities you’re a part of. Keep in mind that communities can be defined by...
Place: groups of people who live/work/play near one another
Action: groups of people who create change in the world by building, doing, or solving something together (Examples: Black Lives Matter, Girls Who Code, March for Our Lives)
Interest: groups of people coming together based on shared interest, experience, or expertise
Circumstance: groups of people brought together either by chance or external events/situations
Use four columns in your chart, like this.
Your turn.
What communities are you a part of?
Spend 5-10 minutes making a list of as many as you can think of.
In fact, here’s a simple GoogleDoc you can download and fill in right now.
Once you’ve completed that exercise for several of the communities you are a part of, you might start to see one community seems to be the most obvious one to write about.
Go with the one that you feel gives the best chance to help you share more about yourself.
Once you’ve chosen a community or two, map out your content using the BEABIES Exercise . That exercise asks:
What did you actually do in that community? (Tip: use active verbs like “organized” and “managed” to clarify your responsibilities).
What kinds of problems did you solve (personally, locally, or globally)?
What specific impact did you have?
What did you learn (skills, qualities, values)?
How did you apply the lessons you learned in and outside of that community?
Don’t skip that step. It’s important.
The Narrative Structure . This structure works well for students who have faced a challenge in this community. Otherwise, the Montage Structure works well.
Consider answering these three questions in your essay if you choose the Narrative Structure:
What challenge did you face?
What did you do about it?
What did you learn?
Here’s an example of a narrative “community” essay based on a challenge that tackles those three questions, roughly in order:
I look around my room, dimly lit by an orange light. On my desk, a framed picture of an Asian family beaming their smiles, buried among US history textbooks and The Great Gatsby. A Korean ballad streams from two tiny computer speakers. Pamphlets of American colleges scattered on the floor. A cold December wind wafts a strange infusion of ramen and leftover pizza. On the wall in the far back, a Korean flag hangs besides a Led Zeppelin poster. Do I consider myself Korean or American? A few years back, I would have replied: “Neither.” The frustrating moments of miscommunication, the stifling homesickness, and the impossible dilemma of deciding between the Korean or American table in the dining hall, all fueled my identity crisis. Standing in the “Foreign Passports” section at JFK, I have always felt out of place. Sure, I held a Korean passport in my hands, and I loved kimchi and Yuna Kim and knew the Korean Anthem by heart. But I also loved macaroni and cheese and LeBron. Deep inside, I feared I’d labeled by my airport customs category: a foreigner everywhere. This ambiguity, however, has granted me the opportunity to absorb the best of both worlds. Look at my dorm room. This mélange of cultures in my East-meets-West room embodies the diversity that characterizes my international student life. I’ve learned to accept my “ambiguity” as “diversity,” as a third-culture student embracing both identities. Do I consider myself Korean or American? Now, I can proudly answer: “Both.” — — —
(250 words)
While this author doesn’t go into too much depth on the “What did you do about it?” question named above, we do get a sense of the challenge he faced and what he learned.
For more on how to use the narrative structure, check out the free guide to writing the personal statement.
The Montage Structure. This is another potential structure, often times great for essays that don’t necessarily focus on a particular challenge.
Here’s a great example:
Storytellers (Montage Structure)
I belong to a community of storytellers. Throughout my childhood, my mother and I spent countless hours immersed in the magical land of bedtime stories. We took daring adventures and explored far away lands. Imagination ran wild, characters came to life, and I became acquainted with heroes and lessons that continue to inspire me today. It was a ritual that I will never forget. In school I met many other storytellers—teachers, coaches, and fellow students whose stories taught me valuable lessons and enabled me to share stories of my own. My stories took shape through my involvement with theatre. I have learned that telling stories can be just as powerful as hearing them. When I tell a story, I can shape the world I live in and share my deepest emotions with the audience. This is exactly why I love theatre so much. The audience can relate to the story in many of the same powerful ways that I do. I love to perform with my theatre class to entertain and educate young audiences throughout my community. To tell our stories, we travel to elementary and middle schools performing plays that help educate younger students of the dangers of drugs, alcohol, and bullying. As storytellers, we aim to touch lives and better the world around us through our stories. — — —
(219 words)
To write this essay, I recommend the “uncommon connections” exercise.
First: Use the Values Exercise at this link to brainstorm predictable values that other students might describe in their essay and then vow not to use those values.
Second : Identify 3-4 uncommon connections (values other students would be unlikely to think of) and give an example of each.
Third : Describe one example per paragraph, perhaps in chronological order.
Another idea: It’s also possible to combine the narrative and montage structures by describing a challenge WHILE also describing a range of values and lessons.
Here’s an example that does this:
The Pumpkin House (Narrative + Montage Combo Structure)
I was raised in “The Pumpkin House.” Every Autumn, on the lawn between the sidewalk and the road, grows our pumpkin. Every summer, we procure seeds from giant pumpkins and plant them in this strip of land. Every fall, the pumpkin grows to be giant. This annual ritual became well known in the community and became the defining feature of our already quirky house. The pumpkin was not just a pumpkin, but a catalyst to creating interactions and community. Conversations often start with “aren’t you the girl in the pumpkin house?” My English teacher knew about our pumpkin and our chickens. His curiosity and weekly updates about the pumpkin helped us connect.
The author touches on the values of family and ritual in the first few sentences. She then mentions the word “community” explicitly, which clearly connects the essay to the prompt. In the second paragraph she mentions the value of connection.
One year, we found our pumpkin splattered across the street. We were devastated; the pumpkin was part of our identity. Word spread, and people came to our house to share in our dismay. Clearly, that pumpkin enriched our life and the entire neighborhoods’.
Here she introduces the problem. Then she raises the stakes: the pumpkin was part of her family’s identity as well as that of the community.
The next morning, our patch contained twelve new pumpkins. Anonymous neighbors left these, plus, a truly gigantic 200 lb. pumpkin on our doorstep.
Describing the neighborhood’s response offers a vivid example of what makes for a great community.
Growing up, the pumpkin challenged me as I wasn’t always comfortable being the center of attention. But in retrospect, I realize that there’s a bit of magic in growing something from a seed and tending it in public. I witnessed how this act of sharing creates authentic community spirit. I wouldn’t be surprised if some day I started my own form of quirky pumpkin growing and reap the benefit of true community.
The author makes another uncommon connection in her conclusion with the unexpected idea that “the pumpkin challenged [her].” She then uses beautiful language to reflect on the lessons she learned: “there’s a bit of magic in growing something from a seed and tending it in public.”
It sometimes helps to outline and draft one or two different essays on different activities, just to see which community might end up being a better topic for your essay.
Not sure? Share your drafts with a friend or teacher and ask this question:
Which of these essays tells you more about me/my core values, helps me stand out, and shows that I’ll engage actively with other communities in college.
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Students applying to college this year will inevitably confront the community essay. In fact, most students will end up responding to several community essay prompts for different schools. For this reason, you should know more than simply how to approach the community essay as a genre. Rather, you will want to learn how to decipher the nuances of each particular prompt, in order to adapt your response appropriately. In this article, we’ll show you how to do just that, through several community essay examples. These examples will also demonstrate how to avoid cliché and make the community essay authentically and convincingly your own.
Do keep in mind that inherent in the word “community” is the idea of multiple people. The personal statement already provides you with a chance to tell the college admissions committee about yourself as an individual. The community essay, however, suggests that you depict yourself among others. You can use this opportunity to your advantage by showing off interpersonal skills, for example. Or, perhaps you wish to relate a moment that forged important relationships. This in turn will indicate what kind of connections you’ll make in the classroom with college peers and professors.
Apart from comprising numerous people, a community can appear in many shapes and sizes. It could be as small as a volleyball team, or as large as a diaspora. It could fill a town soup kitchen, or spread across five boroughs. In fact, due to the internet, certain communities today don’t even require a physical place to congregate. Communities can form around a shared identity, shared place, shared hobby, shared ideology, or shared call to action. They can even arise due to a shared yet unforeseen circumstance.
In a nutshell, the community essay should exhibit three things:
It may look like a fairly simple equation: 1 + 2 = 3. However, each college will word their community essay prompt differently, so it’s important to look out for additional variables. One college may use the community essay as a way to glimpse your core values. Another may use the essay to understand how you would add to diversity on campus. Some may let you decide in which direction to take it—and there are many ways to go!
To get a better idea of how the prompts differ, let’s take a look at some real community essay prompts from the current admission cycle.
1) brown university.
“Students entering Brown often find that making their home on College Hill naturally invites reflection on where they came from. Share how an aspect of your growing up has inspired or challenged you, and what unique contributions this might allow you to make to the Brown community. (200-250 words)”
A close reading of this prompt shows that Brown puts particular emphasis on place. They do this by using the words “home,” “College Hill,” and “where they came from.” Thus, Brown invites writers to think about community through the prism of place. They also emphasize the idea of personal growth or change, through the words “inspired or challenged you.” Therefore, Brown wishes to see how the place you grew up in has affected you. And, they want to know how you in turn will affect their college community.
“NYU was founded on the belief that a student’s identity should not dictate the ability for them to access higher education. That sense of opportunity for all students, of all backgrounds, remains a part of who we are today and a critical part of what makes us a world-class university. Our community embraces diversity, in all its forms, as a cornerstone of the NYU experience.
We would like to better understand how your experiences would help us to shape and grow our diverse community. Please respond in 250 words or less.”
Here, NYU places an emphasis on students’ “identity,” “backgrounds,” and “diversity,” rather than any physical place. (For some students, place may be tied up in those ideas.) Furthermore, while NYU doesn’t ask specifically how identity has changed the essay writer, they do ask about your “experience.” Take this to mean that you can still recount a specific moment, or several moments, that work to portray your particular background. You should also try to link your story with NYU’s values of inclusivity and opportunity.
“Our families and communities often define us and our individual worlds. Community might refer to your cultural group, extended family, religious group, neighborhood or school, sports team or club, co-workers, etc. Describe the world you come from and how you, as a product of it, might add to the diversity of the UW. (300 words max) Tip: Keep in mind that the UW strives to create a community of students richly diverse in cultural backgrounds, experiences, values and viewpoints.”
UW ’s community essay prompt may look the most approachable, for they help define the idea of community. You’ll notice that most of their examples (“families,” “cultural group, extended family, religious group, neighborhood”…) place an emphasis on people. This may clue you in on their desire to see the relationships you’ve made. At the same time, UW uses the words “individual” and “richly diverse.” They, like NYU, wish to see how you fit in and stand out, in order to boost campus diversity.
Begin by picking which community essay you’ll write first. (For practical reasons, you’ll probably want to go with whichever one is due earliest.) Spend time doing a close reading of the prompt, as we’ve done above. Underline key words. Try to interpret exactly what the prompt is asking through these keywords.
Next, brainstorm. I recommend doing this on a blank piece of paper with a pencil. Across the top, make a row of headings. These might be the communities you’re a part of, or the components that make up your identity. Then, jot down descriptive words underneath in each column—whatever comes to you. These words may invoke people and experiences you had with them, feelings, moments of growth, lessons learned, values developed, etc. Now, narrow in on the idea that offers the richest material and that corresponds fully with the prompt.
Lastly, write! You’ll definitely want to describe real moments, in vivid detail. This will keep your essay original, and help you avoid cliché. However, you’ll need to summarize the experience and answer the prompt succinctly, so don’t stray too far into storytelling mode.
Once your first essay is complete, you’ll need to adapt it to the other colleges involving community essays on your list. Again, you’ll want to turn to the prompt for a close reading, and recognize what makes this prompt different from the last. For example, let’s say you’ve written your essay for UW about belonging to your swim team, and how the sports dynamics shaped you. Adapting that essay to Brown’s prompt could involve more of a focus on place. You may ask yourself, how was my swim team in Alaska different than the swim teams we competed against in other states?
Once you’ve adapted the content, you’ll also want to adapt the wording to mimic the prompt. For example, let’s say your UW essay states, “Thinking back to my years in the pool…” As you adapt this essay to Brown’s prompt, you may notice that Brown uses the word “reflection.” Therefore, you might change this sentence to “Reflecting back on my years in the pool…” While this change is minute, it cleverly signals to the reader that you’ve paid attention to the prompt, and are giving that school your full attention.
Brown university community essay example.
I used to hate the NYC subway. I’ve taken it since I was six, going up and down Manhattan, to and from school. By high school, it was a daily nightmare. Spending so much time underground, underneath fluorescent lighting, squashed inside a rickety, rocking train car among strangers, some of whom wanted to talk about conspiracy theories, others who had bedbugs or B.O., or who manspread across two seats, or bickered—it wore me out. The challenge of going anywhere seemed absurd. I dreaded the claustrophobia and disgruntlement.
Yet the subway also inspired my understanding of community. I will never forget the morning I saw a man, several seats away, slide out of his seat and hit the floor. The thump shocked everyone to attention. What we noticed: he appeared drunk, possibly homeless. I was digesting this when a second man got up and, through a sort of awkward embrace, heaved the first man back into his seat. The rest of us had stuck to subway social codes: don’t step out of line. Yet this second man’s silent actions spoke loudly. They said, “I care.”
That day I realized I belong to a group of strangers. What holds us together is our transience, our vulnerabilities, and a willingness to assist. This community is not perfect but one in motion, a perpetual work-in-progress. Now I make it my aim to hold others up. I plan to contribute to the Brown community by helping fellow students and strangers in moments of precariousness.
Here the student finds an original way to write about where they come from. The subway is not their home, yet it remains integral to ideas of belonging. The student shows how a community can be built between strangers, in their responsibility toward each other. The student succeeds at incorporating key words from the prompt (“challenge,” “inspired” “Brown community,” “contribute”) into their community essay.
I grew up in Hawaii, a world bound by water and rich in diversity. In school we learned that this sacred land was invaded, first by Captain Cook, then by missionaries, whalers, traders, plantation owners, and the U.S. government. My parents became part of this problematic takeover when they moved here in the 90s. The first community we knew was our church congregation. At the beginning of mass, we shook hands with our neighbors. We held hands again when we sang the Lord’s Prayer. I didn’t realize our church wasn’t “normal” until our diocese was informed that we had to stop dancing hula and singing Hawaiian hymns. The order came from the Pope himself.
Eventually, I lost faith in God and organized institutions. I thought the banning of hula—an ancient and pure form of expression—seemed medieval, ignorant, and unfair, given that the Hawaiian religion had already been stamped out. I felt a lack of community and a distrust for any place in which I might find one. As a postcolonial inhabitant, I could never belong to the Hawaiian culture, no matter how much I valued it. Then, I was shocked to learn that Queen Ka’ahumanu herself had eliminated the Kapu system, a strict code of conduct in which women were inferior to men. Next went the Hawaiian religion. Queen Ka’ahumanu burned all the temples before turning to Christianity, hoping this religion would offer better opportunities for her people.
I’m not sure what to make of this history. Should I view Queen Ka’ahumanu as a feminist hero, or another failure in her islands’ tragedy? Nothing is black and white about her story, but she did what she thought was beneficial to her people, regardless of tradition. From her story, I’ve learned to accept complexity. I can disagree with institutionalized religion while still believing in my neighbors. I am a product of this place and their presence. At UW, I plan to add to campus diversity through my experience, knowing that diversity comes with contradictions and complications, all of which should be approached with an open and informed mind.
This student also manages to weave in words from the prompt (“family,” “community,” “world,” “product of it,” “add to the diversity,” etc.). Moreover, the student picks one of the examples of community mentioned in the prompt, (namely, a religious group,) and deepens their answer by addressing the complexity inherent in the community they’ve been involved in. While the student displays an inner turmoil about their identity and participation, they find a way to show how they’d contribute to an open-minded campus through their values and intellectual rigor.
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Reflection is a critical component of community-engaged courses and programs. Reflection supports meaning-making, and regular reflection activities help students connect their community engagement experience to course or program learning objectives. Studies show that reflection can strengthen critical thinking 1 and enhance student development on measures of civic values and personal growth . 2 Reflection can come in many forms, but it’s most advantageous when it’s ongoing. Continuous, connected, challenging, and contextualized reflection helps students negotiate the stages of community engagement and supports them to prepare for and process their experiences. 3
The resources below offer guidance, examples and further reading around reflection. We would be glad to work with you to incorporate any of these resources into your community-engaged efforts.
Additional Resources
Explore a range of reflection activities that can be used in many different ways, organized from shortest to longest:
Reflection Guidebook, Santa Monica College This 5-page piece explains the basics of reflection and provides brief descriptions of many different kinds of reflection, as well as tips on what to consider as you determine what fits your course and learning goals.
Reflection toolkit, Northwest Service Academy This toolkit, designed for leaders facilitating reflection for the first time, explains what reflection is and why it’s important, and provides guidance for leading a variety of reflection activities. The activities are categorized by time commitment.
Reflection resources, Clemson University A collection of 28 different reflection activities for instructors, organized by category: reflection activities for prior knowledge (to use before engagement), cognition, metacognition, competency, and personal growth & change. Activities are marked for formative and graded, summative assessment.
Reflection activities: Service-Learning’s not-so-secret weapon , Katie Halcrow This 13-page piece outlines 33 different reflection activities for classroom use, grouped by “Reflection Activities In and Out of Class,” “Rigorous Academic Links,” and “Presenting Culmination of Experience.” The list includes group work, written activities, discussion activities, artwork, and ways to showcase students’ work.
Service-Learning Reflection Journal, Purdue University This student-facing handbook includes an initial assessment scale, pre-service project planning documents, a daily or weekly journal template, a final reflection assignment prompt, and a post-assessment.
International Service-Learning Reflection Journal, Purdue University This handbook, explicitly directed to students studying abroad, includes a pre-entry reflection and assignment, public affairs scale, daily/weekly journal template, reflective paper prompt, re-entry reflection and assignment, and a post-assessment public affairs scale.
Below is a list of peer-reviewed articles about reflection (most recent first)
Reflective Practice, Campus Compact
An extensive bibliography with links to peer-reviewed research on reflective practice in community-engaged learning.
Richard, D., Keen, C., Hatcher, J.A., and Pease, H. A. (2016). Pathways to Adult Civic Engagement: Benefits of Reflection and Dialogue across Difference in Higher Education Service-Learning Programs . Michigan Journal of Community Service Learning, 23(1), 60-74.
Drawing from a 30-campus, 1000+ participant dataset, Richard et al. explore the relationship between college engagement experiences and civic outcomes after college. They found that “dialogue with others across difference was the strongest predictor of cultivating civic outcomes after college. In addition, both structured and informal reflection independently contributed to civic outcomes (i.e., civic-mindedness, voluntary action, civic action).”
van Goethem, A., van Hoof, A., Orobio de Castro, B., Van Aken, M., & Hart, D. (2014). The role of reflection in the effects of community service on adolescent development: a meta-analysis. Child development, 85(6), 2114–2130. https://doi.org/10.1111/cdev.12274
This meta-analysis of 49 studies finds again that reflection is essential to the positive academic, personal, social, and civic outcomes of service-learning. Positive effects of service-learning increased with greater reflection and particularly reflection on academic content.
Ash S.L., Clayton P.H. (2004). The Articulated Learning: An Approach to Guided Reflection and Assessment . Innovative Higher Education 29(2), 137–54.
The academic article that originated the DEAL reflection framework, this text describes the Articulated Learning framework’s three main components: description of an experience, analysis in accordance with relevant learning categories, and articulation of learning outcomes. It also considers applications for the framework in research and faculty development.
Hatcher, J.A, Bringle, R.G, & Muthiah, R. (2004). Designing effective reflection: What matters to service learning? Michigan Journal of Community Service Learning 11(1), 38-46.
This study, based on survey responses of undergraduate students, found that successful courses included reflection activities that (a) clarified personal values, (b) were a regular part of the course, and (c) were structured with clear guidelines and directions. The paper also discusses implications for practice.
Eyler J. (2002). Reflection: Linking Service and Learning—Linking Students and Communities . Journal of Social Issues, 58(3), 517–34.
This article reviews research on reflection practices in service-learning and collects concrete suggestions for attaining service-learning learning goals. It includes the reflection map from Eyler (2001) that can guide faculty to support students in multiple dimensions of reflection, including reflecting alone, with classmates, and with partners as well as before, during, and after service.
Eyler, J. (2001). Creating Your Reflection Map . In M. Canada (ed. ) Service-learning: Practical advice and models. San Francisco: Jossey-Bass, New Directions for Higher Education, 2001(114), 35–43.
This piece outlines the how and why or reflection in a guide to using the reflection map, a “tool to help practitioners organize their thinking about integrating continuous reflective processes into their service-learning practice.” The tool invites faculty to think about reflection in a matrix of time and interaction: reflecting alone, with classmates, and with partners, as well as before, during, and after service.
Bringle, R.G. and J.A. Hatcher (1999). Reflection in Service Learning: Making Meaning of Experience . Educational Horizons, Summer, 179-185.
This brief article offers an easy introduction to service-learning, including narrative about the philosophical basis for reflection, types of reflection for service learning, assessing reflection, and consequences of reflection.
References:
1. Eyler, J., & Giles Jr., D.E. (1999). Where’s the Learning in Service-Learning? San Francisco, CA: Jossey-Bass. 2. Ash, S.L.; Clayton, P.H.; Atkinson, M.P. (2005). Integrating Reflection and Assessment to Capture and Improve Student Learning. Michigan Journal of Community Service Learning 11(2), 49-60. 3. Eyler, J., Giles Jr., D.E., and Schmiede, A. (1996). A Practitioner’s Guide to Reflection in Service-Learning: Student Voices and Reflections. Vanderbilt University.
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Joseph Kao traces his sense of altruism and environmental mission back to the years he spent living in Taiwan with his grandmother, a refugee from the Chinese Communist Revolution.
“She told me stories about how her dad, a doctor, risked his life to save the people in their town by staying behind to let others escape first,” says Kao. “He died because of his sense of duty as a doctor. Stories like that really instilled in me a sense of altruism.”
Besides, he adds, “it happens to be built into my Chinese name as well — Renheng “仁恆” where Ren (or “仁”) means altruism and Heng (“恆”) means perpetuity.” Kao’s grandmother survived her exile by collecting recyclables and still-functional castoffs from the streets, “converting a lot of the resources that people consider trash into survival tools.” Post-war, she continued recycling with her son and young grandson in Taiwan, and “that’s why I’m focusing my startup on this idea of circular economies.”
Apple was great for four years because I was always on the frontier of technology innovation. I was working on the Apple Vision Pro lens module. I was the first material scientist brought into the smart glasses program and grew my team to 10 people in less than two years. But it’s a big organization, and I was eager to drive more impact and innovation in a new venture where I can contribute my material science expertise in a more efficient way.
My parents were chemists, and my interest in garbage and trash motivated me to study material science. My PhD work was focused on biodegradable plastics. But while I was at Apple, and during the pandemic, I learned more about recycling.
Quote “I want to build a corporate culture that’s consistent with my and my team’s core values.”
I saw how my garbage collector mixed the recyclables and the trash when they picked it up. in my community. I called the local recycling company and learned that only about 5-10% of what we put into our recycling bin is really recycled. That’s why I started this recycling group during the pandemic. I also started a mission to find the local recycling center and work with the community to collect and transfer recyclables to that center, including plastics, glass, and other household recyclables.
Because of my plastics background, I was introduced to Apple’s zero-waste initiatives. One of the big things they were thinking about was how to recycle the band for the Apple Watch. Apple wants to make sure they’re using 100% recycled materials by 2030. Another initiative I was lucky to be part of is e-waste recycling, which provides consumers with the option to recycle their electronics. That’s where I got intrigued by this field of battery recycling.
In the past year, I’ve looked into all the verticals — from textiles to e-waste to EV batteries — and the startup I’m building is focused on reusing and giving a second life to EV batteries. That’s where I see a lot of my core values, technical expertise, and passion start to come together.
Some companies may not have the resources to do this work, but the big players can drive the willingness to buy those products with sustainable materials and technologies. Many companies complain that it’s impossible to achieve the desired financial returns and environmental impacts simultaneously. I don’t buy that. There’s always a solution if you look deep and hard.
I always advocate for the three Rs of circular economies — recycle, reduce, and reuse. Many people have this idea that recycling is always the best thing to do, but also consider reducing and reusing your waste. I created a forum in a chat group where people could, for example, exchange and upcycle materials. Check those platforms because maybe there’s someone interested in using your waste. The second thing is reducing. You don’t always have to buy new things. You can find second-hand products as long as they function. That’s what I learned during my upbringing in Taiwan. The third thing is finding the right recycling channel. No one sorts or cares about where the recyclables are going. If you can help do the sorting right at the source, then we can create the circularity of all kinds of materials.
I’ve learned to view problems from the consumer and business perspective. How do you communicate to consumers, and how do you design a tool to help them recycle more easily? As an engineer, I didn’t think much about that. Communication matters. My marketing and consumer behavior classes convinced me that more than 80-90% of Americans want to recycle, but it’s just not convenient to do so. They don’t know what to do. So, when you build a platform to help people recycle, it’s critical to embed convenience and education in your business model. Business school also showed me how to evaluate the financials.
Managing Growing Enterprises with David Dodson. A privilege of being a founder or leader in a small growing startup is that you get to shape the culture and hire, and sometimes even fire, the right people to preserve that culture. Professor Dodson brought in amazing guests, and he himself is a leader at building all kinds of companies. We spent almost half a quarter just focusing on how to hire the right people to make sure the company culture aligns with your values. That’s definitely the kind of manager and leader I want to become.
My parents are Buddhists, and in Taiwan the silent retreat is very popular. I was forced to do it when I was young, but it grew on me over the years. As I get older and gain more responsibilities in this materialistic world, it’s important to focus on what I really want to accomplish. That goes back to why I’m here at Stanford. A job in big tech is great. It can be fulfilling, and you get paid well. But what do you want to contribute to the world? I can listen to my inner voice through meditation at these silent retreats to learn more about myself. At one point, I was confused about why I existed in the world. Self-reflection made me come back to school and do something that matters.
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Addressing the Social Determinants of Health: Community Engagement Immersion (NURS 354) is a case study that uses a flipped classroom format in which students process class materials at community sites with preceptors while in-class time is focused on a deeper and interactive exploration of the course content with course faculty (Schroeder et al., 2019).
Community programs can expand the opportunities for youth to acquire personal and social assets and to experience the broad range of features of positive developmental settings. Programs can also fill gaps in the opportunities available in specific adolescents' lives. Among other things, these programs can incorporate opportunities for ...
Community immersion has always been regarded as an important component of a medical education curriculum. Such program is essential in achieving various educational outcomes.
The community immersion clerkship is part of a larger community health program spanning the 6 years of undergraduate medical training, including community-oriented (epidemiology, occupational health, health economics, and ethics) as well as community-based training activities (such as ambulatory care clerkship, home care visits, and short-term ...
Counselor education programs using community immersion projects in their coursework to enhance the multicultural awareness of students usually require students to interact with marginalized communities. Examples of marginalized communities typically include: racial/ethnic minorities, LGBTQIA-identifying, older populations, homeless, people ...
The Impact of Immersion. The Immersion Program has become one of the most popular and meaningful parts of community engagement at Rollins College for many faculty, staff, and students. The Immersion Program at Rollins College is rooted in community engagement and leadership, seeking to broaden students' understanding of the world through ...
The Community Immersion Program designed by and intended for the city it serves, has helped the Austin Police Department (APD) build bridges and establishes partnerships in the community. The program has a powerful effect in that it requires participants (officers) to immerse themselves in a portion of the community, engage in dialogue with ...
Community engagement pedagogies, often called "service learning," are ones that combine learning goals and community service in ways that can enhance both student growth and the common good. In the words of the National Service Learning Clearinghouse, it is "a teaching and learning strategy that integrates meaningful community service ...
Step 1: Decide What Community to Write About. Step 2: The BEABIES Exercise. Step 3: Pick a Structure (Narrative or Montage) Community Essay Example: East Meets West. Community Essay Example: Storytellers. The Uncommon Connections Exercise.
In a nutshell, the community essay should exhibit three things: An aspect of yourself, 2. in the context of a community you belonged to, and 3. how this experience may shape your contribution to the community you'll join in college. It may look like a fairly simple equation: 1 + 2 = 3. However, each college will word their community essay ...
Reflection supports meaning-making, and regular reflection activities help students connect their community engagement experience to course or program learning objectives. Studies show that reflection can strengthen critical thinking 1 and enhance student development on measures of civic values and personal growth . 2 Reflection can come in ...
5. Organizers must be able to give ideas about the benefits and other involvement the community may do. * Entering the Community. The community should be aware on the purpose of the groups' entry. At this stage, there should be a courtesy call for everyone you may get in touch during the implementation of the project.
Community immersion is a strategy in community organizing that is sought to imbibe among the NSTP trainees a better understanding and realization of the different community concerns through the exposure on actual life situations specifically in the deprived, depressed and the underprivileged (DDU) communities.
The Community Immersion Program, designed by and intended for the city it serves, has helped the Austin Police Department build bridges and establish partnerships in the community. While the program is not a panacea, it represents the pinnacle of a value system the agency conveys to officers from the day they are recruited through the day they ...
Community Immersion Analysis On Community. definition of Community, Netting, Kettner, McMurty and Thomas (2012) stated by Warren (1978) "Community is the combination of social units and systems that perform the major social functions relevant to meeting people's needs on a local level." (p.133). Understanding communities is important to ...
NATIONAL SERVICE TRAINING PROGRAM NARRATIVE REPORT OF COMMUNITY IMMERSION. Submitted to: Quennie Llera. Immersion Adviser. In Partial Fulfilment of the Requirements for the Bachelor of Science in Computer Engineering in National Service Training Program. Submitted by: Asmin P. Kamensali. 1BSCpE-B. June, 2021. Kabacan, Cotabato Philippines
Cultural Immersion Experience. One of the most significant benefits of learning English in the United States is the opportunity for cultural immersion. Language and culture are closely intertwined, and by immersing oneself in an English-speaking environment, learners gain a deeper understanding of American culture and society.
What convinced you to apply to the Stanford MSx Program? Apple was great for four years because I was always on the frontier of technology innovation. I was working on the Apple Vision Pro lens module. I was the first material scientist brought into the smart glasses program and grew my team to 10 people in less than two years.
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WorldBuild 365. от 09 September 2016. Moscow: The making of a modern metropolis. 09 September 2016. If there is a city that is emblematic of Russia's journey from the medieval period, through the Imperial Era, past the Soviet Union to the present day, it is Moscow. The architecture of the Russian capital is like a tapestry — weaving ...
Many colleges ask applicants to write essays explaining exactly why they want to attend not just any college, but their school in particular. However, once you are up to your ears in essay writing ...
Elektrostal Geography. Geographic Information regarding City of Elektrostal. Elektrostal Geographical coordinates. Latitude: 55.8, Longitude: 38.45. 55° 48′ 0″ North, 38° 27′ 0″ East. Elektrostal Area. 4,951 hectares. 49.51 km² (19.12 sq mi) Elektrostal Altitude.
Burial 5 was the most unique, it was found in a coffin made of a larch trunk, with a tightly closed lid. Due to the preservative properties of larch and lack of air access, the coffin contained a well-preserved mummy of a child with an accompanying set of grave goods. The interred individual retained the skin on his face and had a leather ...